Talk:Seddie/@comment-7184880-20130427165832

Alright, i've edidited my Iggodbye ending to everyone's liking for now.

Carly won't be in love with Freddie.

Carly walks into the studio. "Hey" she says. Sup? says Freddie. Carly says, "I'm just saying goodbye." Freddie responds, "Oh, OK." (This is what Freddie is thinking in his mind) ''I can't decide. Do I want Sam or Carly. I mean, i've loved Carly all my life. But, Sam, there's just something special about her. I don't know what it is, but something about her makes me want her more. I want Sam. She's the one i wanna be with. I truly love her, and i can't deny it. " ''Hey, Carly. Could you excuse me for a sec?" Carly replies, "OK".

And the rest is pretty much the same, but i've added more to the very end.

"So, this is a cool motorcycle." Freddie says. "We just get back together and that's whatcha say?" says Sam. "Sorry, but my mom's not gonna like this." says Freddie. "Do ya really care?" Sam says. "Not really!" Freddie replies.

Well, is it better now? If you guys have anymore suggestions what so ever, please tell me, i'm always willing to edit this story to make it perfect. What did you like and not like about it? Well, thanks for reading my edit!