Thread:3cooldog92/@comment-4948262-20120729051400/@comment-3247345-20120801063434

Trust me, your Army does not take commands from America, although you're right that it is payed in American dollars. The US government seem to be frustrated that the Army isn't going after terrorists. The only thing the US government is accusing Pakistan of is harboring Osama. They seem to think that someone in the Pakistani goverment knew where he was. I don't know if that's true but the President didn't trust the government so that's why they killed him without Pakistani knowlege. As far as Al Quida and the Taliban, they weren't created by the US. They existed already. But they were funded, armed and trained by the CIA in Pakistan to try to drive the Soviet Union out of Afghanistan. They were not under US control, but they were doing things the US liked. They certainly wouldn't be so dangerous today if the CIA hadn't done that. Then we stopped funding them when the Soviets left Afghanistan. As far as the World Trade Center goes, that's a conspiracy theory here in the US that the US government was behind it. I personally think it really was Osama. What happened was that Saddam Hussein of Iraq invaded Kuwait and was threatening Saudi Arabia. The US President sent the US Army to stop him from invading Saudi Arabia. Saudi Arabia was used as base to drive Saddam out of Kuwait. The problem is he didn't take the US Army out of Saudi Arabia when Iraq was out of Kuwait. Since Saudi Arabia is the guardian of the holy cities Mecca and Medina that angered a lot of Musilums, including Osama. That and the fact that the US supported dictators everywhere contributed to anti Americanism in Muslim countries. That's eventually what led to the the World Trade Center attacks. The US didn't do it itself but its policy in the region probably contributed to the attacks. So it's the US government's fault, but they didn't do it themselves. Now, there is a theory that the CIA knew about it before hand and could have stopped it but the US government let it happen so they would have an excuse for war. The US killed Osama in May 2011 in helicopter raid into Pakistan. They found that he was directing terrorist attacks from is compound in his compound in Islamabad. As far as the minerals in Balochistan, I haven't heard about it. However, the US government and the people who support it are money grubbing dirtbags, so I would not be surprised if that's true. America may very well be the biggest terrorist. US policy in the Middle East has caused all kinds of terrorist problems so there may be some truth to that statement.

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