Talk:Creddie/@comment-3101374-20111114054146

So, I was thinking about iSaved Your Life the other day, and I decided that it should have ended differently. So, I tried to write it:

(Freddie turns towards the elevator)

Carly: Wait. (Freddie turns around. Carly pauses) ... I love you.

Freddie: (smiles sweetly) Carly...

Carly: I know you don't believe it, but I do. I... love you.

Freddie: Carly... I'm sure you do love me, but... I don't think you love me... THAT way.

Carly: (smiles) The good way?

Freddie: (smiles and nods) Yeah, the good way. As I said, maybe when the "hero thing" wears off, and I get rid of this stupid cast, we could try this again. One day.

Carly: One day. You won't forget me?

Freddie: (chuckles) Carly Shay, I could never forget my first love.

Carly: And I could never forget mine.

Freddie: (long pause) ... I love you too.

(Carly smiles, and they kiss for a few seconds)

Carly: (smiles) Just a little something to remember this week.

Freddie: (smiles) I wouldn't forget it anyway.

--EPISODE ENDS--

So, what did you guys think? Was it OK?