Talk:Creddie/@comment-3101374-20110309055443

Finishing chapter 1 of my Creddie story from below! I will post the first chapter in a blog so you guys can see all of it!

''After the show, Carly is sitting on the couch, flipping through a magazine. Freddie comes down the stairs''

Freddie: What's up?

Carly: What do you mean?

Freddie: You seemed a bit... off during the show tonight.

Carly: (looking away) I don't know what you're talking about.

Freddie: (puts a hand on Carly's shoulder) Come on, Carly, what's up.

Carly: Nothing, it's... it's just stupid.

Freddie: Ok, then.

(Carly doesn't respond. Freddie looks very concerned)

Freddie: Are you sure there's nothing wrong.

Carly: (slightly sad and angry) Freddie, for the last time, I'm fine!

Freddie: (looks hurt) Oh.

Carly: (looks guilty and hurt) Freddie... I... I didn't mean to-\

Freddie: It's cool. I'll... I'll just get home to my mom.

(Freddie leaves, Carly sits on the couch, and seems to be on the verge of tears)

Carly: (muttering) Well, that ruins my chances with him.

'''End of Chapter One! Stay tuned for the "Chapter one blog" and the start of Chapter Two!!!'''