Talk:IOMG/@comment-7814097-20110414021103

'''Hi guys! I'm writing fanfiction episodes of season 5 that include Sam and Freddie dating. But I wanna make sure imma good fanfiction writer. So here is a scene from my fanfiction episode iGet A Job. :)''' (Carly enters apartment. Spencer is in kitchen)

Carly: Hey Spencer.

Spencer: Hey kiddo.

Carly:... Um can I ask you something???

Spencer: Does it involve Venezuela doctors?

Carly: Nooooo...

Spencer: then yes.

Carly: so... I was wondering.... If you could let me go to a cuttlefish concert... (quietly)...and buy my ticket....

Spencer: I just bought you a new PearPhone last month.

Carly: and that was one month ago!

Spencer: sorry Carly. You're going to have to buy your ticket yourself.

Carly: ya, ok, how am I supposed to do that?

Spencer: um... Get a job?

Carly: ew!

Spencer: sorry. Anyways, ive gotta go. Canada is calling me.

(Spencer exits) THEME SONG.

(the next day)

Sam enters Carly's apartment.

Sam: hey carls.

(Carly is dressed in uniform)

Sam: (chuckles) what's up with the outfit?

Carly: I gotta job at Inside Out Burger!

Sam: (gags) job?!?!

Carly: Sam... If want to go to the concert with you, i have to buy my ticket myself. And if I work at Inside Out Burger, I should be able to go to the concert next week... why are you holding a giant salami?

Sam: oh! Freddie texted me and said he needed my help. (eats salami) and I'm hungry.

Carly: and why aren't you in his apartment? He said he needs help.

Sam: oh yeah. Later!

(scene leads to Sam knocking on Freddies door. Mrs benson opens it.)

Ms. Benson: oh. It's you. (she says in slightly disgusted tone)

Sam: yeah, I'm here to see Freddie. (continues to eat salami)

Mrs.Benson: ugh. He's in his room. (she says as she leaves the apartment, but turns around, grabs the salami, and throws it in trash. Sam shrugs and walks into Freddies room. Freddie is laying in bed with blanket over head.)

Sam: Hey Freddie. I got your text. What's wrong?

Freddie: My mom thinks I'm sick.

Sam: Are you?

Freddie: No. But she said I felt warm.

Sam: Maybe it has to do with that blanket on your head.

(Sam tries to pull it off. Freddie blocks it.)

Sam: Dude! You need to take that blanket off.

Freddie: I can't.

Sam: Uh huh. And why is that?

(Freddie looks nervously around and pulls blanket off his head.)

(And instead of it being it's regular dark brown, it was ice white.)

End of scene.

'''So... Whadja think? Please reply. Any criticism is appreciated. :)'''