Talk:Seddie/@comment-3987066-20110607054349

A little section of a chapter of my fanfic...Carly's spying on them and she's narrating so they dont know she's there...and I've got writer's block. What should Freddie say after? (:

After a long pause, Freddie quietly asks “Are you jealous of Carly?”

“Jealous of what?”

“Carly.”

“I heard you,” Sam said sarcastically. “But jealous of what, specifically? What do you think I should be jealous of?” Oh, dear. This isn’t going to be pretty. “I don’t know,” Freddie replied.

Well, my train of thought was on the wrong track.

“Her looks? Her personality? All of her friends? The plethora boys kneeling at her feet?” Sam asked, her eyes shifting to her hands.

“Um, okay. Sure.”

This takes Sam a long time to think about. “Well,” she finally started, “Carly is a lucky person. She’s prettier, her personality is better, more boys like her.”

Freddie doesn’t ask who she’s comparing me to. He already knows.

“She’s a Mary-Sue,” Sam continued. “But she’s got problems, too. Her dad is never there…her mom is dead...she has to take care of Spencer all the time, even though it’s supposed to be vice versa.”

You got that right.

“…there’s a lot of reasons for me to be jealous of Carly, but I’m not,” Sam summed up, finally looking Freddie in the eye.

“Good,” Freddie smiled. “You shouldn’t be.”

Sam raised an eyebrow at Freddie. “What’s that supposed to mean?”

what should freddie say???