Talk:Seddie/@comment-2242989-20101016025219

I know this is random, but here's a Seddie poem I wrote: There is a thick line between love and hate.

This line has never been broken,

Thus, love and hate are opposites.

The line has never been broken...

Until now, that is.

Love and hate are complete opposites.

Love always gives and cherishes the significant other,

While hate does the opposite of love.

As you watch the love and hate wither, you watch it as it grows.

The more you hate, the more you love.

This seems to be persistent in the case of the two lovers who seem to be like this.

One day,

From their pondering and complex relationship, they shall see

The love that lies beneath all the hate and loathe from the surface,

Because the love is beneath the surface,

And no one even knows about this...

Not even them...

There's a thick line between love and hate,

Yet they managed to break it,

While no other had broken it before...

Do any of you guys think my poem is good?