User blog:HeyPeople145/ISam's Dad

This is my personal sequel. It's probably not going to be as good as I hoped because it's almost 1 am and the only thing that is keeping me awake are chocolate chips. I won't mind criticism as long as it's not to harsh. Here it goes:

iSam's Dad
It was a dark, rainy day in Seattle. Nothing new. The iCarly crew (including Spencer) was at Sam's house for a change. Sam and her mother had just got done fighting on what to get on their pizza. They decided to go with everything. The door bell rang. "Is someone gonna get that?" both Sam and her mother asked. "I'll get it" said Carly. She opened the door only to find a man who looked violent. "Do the Pucketts live here?," asked the man. For some reason Carly felt like she had seen him before, but she couldn't quite remember who he was. "What are you doing here Marshall?" Sam's mom asked. "Look I came to apologize-" "I never thought I would see you again, except when I see you on T.V., winning an award for something you don't even deserve" "Pam, sorry I left you with the twins but-" "Sorry doesn't cut it." Pam said viciously. "Dad what are you doing here? Shouldn't you be on your world tour?" Asked Sam. Carly realized who he was. "You're Eminem!!!" She shouted. "Sam, how come you never told us Eminem was your father?" Asked Freddie. "Oh my God! Can I have an autograph?" Spencer shouted. Eminem gave him a dirty look and Spencer backed away. "Yes it's true, Eminem is my dad."Sam said.