Talk:Creddie/@comment-5137076-20120913105941

What do you think of my story (sorry but its not Creddie related): This is just chapter one, I'm done with chapter 2 but still......

 Ultimate 9 

 “Survive the wild and don’t surrender and be caught by the others” 

 Chapter 1

 I strode into the busy streets holding the bread I stole from the bakery, I was hungry and I can’t afford food for myself because my family was living in poverty. I tried not to catch to much attention from the people surrounding me. I don’t want anyone to call the Shermits who would lock me in jail in the Patrol Station and ask money from my family just to release me. My name is Flavia Cureus, I have one sister named Maple and my Mother’s name is Delicia, my Father’s name is Magnus, but he died because his working place crashed down from the storm. Now my Father’s has died, I’m the one in charge with everything, but Mother was also in charge with some of the things like taking care of Maple. There was an event here in Ciena where people were chosen by the gods and compete head to head with the other chosen ones; the winners would receive a large amount of gold but unluckily the chosen ones who lost would have their city destroyed by the commands Maximus. Maximus is the richest man in the world; he destroyed over ten thousand cities because they have lost from the events. We call these events the Maximus Ultimates. I never really wanted to have my name on the fire; I don’t want Maximus to destroy Ciena.