User blog comment:Icarlyfreak101/iStar In A Play/@comment-3522343-20110715011105

I don't know who Selena Shay is (??), but I also find the story kinda hard to read. Maybe you could do more paragraphing, and better spelling and grammar. For example instead of: CarlyPOV: And u had 2 jack-slap himSelenaPov: Yeah, I'm a boxer not a marcher, then i wrote a play for the school which counts as another. HAH!!! FreddiePov: ........etc. You could write: Carly: "And you had to jack-slap him!"

Selena: "Yeah, I'm a boxer, not a marcher- then I wrote a play for the school, which counts as another. HA!"

Freddie: "...."