Talk:Seddie Fanfiction/@comment-4087636-20110730083601

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7132233/1/Ladies_Man

i need some more constructive criticism. i'm ambitious. :)

i hate authors who go OMG THIS PERSON DOESNT LIKE MY STORY THEY ARE MEAN. uh, whatever. not everyone is gonna like ur stuff. thats life. xD

please read! tell me anything that's wrong with it, i wanna write better!