Thread:MasterT-Bo/@comment-7184880-20130426015005/@comment-7184880-20130428211556

I like this idea! The only thing about it is, Giratina is in my game, but he only assists Arceus in his battle and can't be damaged. But stil, i'll combine that idea with my Arceus idea!!! :) Everyone is happy!!!! :D

So, i'm going to write my first draft of chapter 3 right here. Tell me what i can change :)

Chapter 3: Trainer Meets Trainer: Pokemon Trainer is training. Pokemon Trainer 2 comes and challenges him to a battle. In the middle of their battle, Pokemon come charging at them. Unknown to the trainers that they are being controlled by the Subspace Army. The two go on a quest and defeat every Pokemon in their way. Arceus gets furious, and takes them to a parallel universe. They engage in a fight, with Dialga, Palkia, and Giratina assisting Arceus. The trainers defeat Arceus and continue their journey