Talk:Creddie/@comment-3276102-20110308041605

Just recently, I was re-reading a draft of an iCarly fan fiction story (which, unfortunately, seems to have been abandoned by its author). It wasn't a Creddie story, but it did have a moment between Carly and Freddie that I thought was rather interesting.

The scene takes place in Carly's living room. Carly and Sam are waiting anxiously, and then Freddie walks in, looking quite glum. The following dialogue ensues :

Sam : Did you talk to Melanie?

Freddie : Yes.

Carly : And ... ?

Freddie : No good.

Sam : I don't believe it. She STILL thinks that you only want to go out with her because you feel sorry for her?

Freddie : Yes. [Sighs] I've told her about fifty times now that I really do like her, but she won't listen. No matter what I say, no matter what I do, no matter what I tell Melanie, I just cannot get through to her.

Carly : I'm so sorry, Freddie. This must really hurt.

Freddie : "Hurt" ... ? Carly, do you have any idea what it's like ... to be completely in love with somebody, to TELL them over and over again that you love them, but no matter what you say ... They keep insisting that you don't really love them, that you're only acting like you are, for some ridiculous, bogus reason?

Do you know what it's like to want to be with someone more than anything in the entire world, and to have them tell YOU, to your face, that you don't really want that? Carly, can you even imagine what that's like?

Carly : ... Oh, my gosh, Freddie. I will TRY.

Freddie : [Pauses, and then turns to look sheepishly at Carly]

The draft of this scene actually ended there. The author came up with a dozen different thoughts about how the dialogue should proceed, but she was never happy with any of them.

Anyway, I thought you folks might find it an interesting Carly/Freddie moment, even if it wasn't a Creddie relationship story.