Talk:Seddie/@comment-3512889-20120427114508

I tried, ocne again, to write a song :P I know, its not that good, but I want you gyus to read it :) and please corretc things that you cant say this way. :)

this song takes place

back when our story just began

the city wa sours, I was yours and you were mine

We could handle every situation, we'd shoot places down without a gun

we had no limits, we'd got the time

We were walking outta liens, lines we could never define

now Im standing in the rain

nothing feeling but the pain

its always gonna be the same

me standing here, missin you

I had never ever seen

someone like you before

but then you wanted less while I wanted more

so that Im standing behind closed doors.

standing here missin you

we owned the lights of the sun

& we could run, run, run .. faster than anyone

else who tried to tear us apart

they took my strengtht, but I still got that part of your heart.

eventually, that wasnt enough, You were tough, while I was rough

Did I myself break the two os us up, due to my behavior?

now Im standing in the rain

nothing feeling but the pain

its always gonna be the same

me standing here, missin you

I had never ever seen

someone like you before

but then you wanted less while I wanted more

so that Im standing behind closed doors.

standing here missin you

Im currently being such a mess

Im always jealous of everyone, who apparently got the best

I cry every time I see raindrops fall

down, till I dont know anymore, if those might be my tears.

and then I wonder, if you too, have to battle with such fears?

now Im standing in the rain

nothing feeling but the pain

its always gonna be the same

me standing here, missin you

I had never ever seen

someone like you before

but then you wanted less while I wanted more

so that Im standing behind closed doors.

standing here missin you

so, whatcha think about it, huh? ;) :D

and btw, when do I say I see rain falling down and when is it just I see rian fall down? would be so pleased if you guys replied. :))