Talk:Seddie/@comment-3536296-20110608212029

Hey everyone! I love writing, I'm pretty good at stories, just not poems:P Here's a poem, made by Tima!

Unlock the heart

Feel my love

Wheres the key?

My heart is open Your beauty is set free Free the soul And feel warm

Lock your heart

We don't need

anyone else

Our love will live on

in our hearts

forever and ever

Was it good, need improving, or just terrible?