Talk:Creddie/@comment-3425559-20110426124037

I have 2 story ideas for Creddie and I need your guys opinions on which is the best. I will say both end with them kissing. I've retyped this one in case some people didn't see it.

(Idea #1)

(Carly and Freddie are talking in Carly's room)

Freddie: Hey, Carly?

Carly: Yeah, Freddie?

Freddie: How come you never use that skateboard on your wall? It is real right?

Carly: Yeah. It's real. I just never thought about using it.

Freddie: I could teach you. I mean, if you want me to.

Carly: Sure. When?

Freddie: When ever your ready.

Carly: How about now? It's perfect outside.

Freddie: Ok. You have a helmet?

Carly: Yeah (gets her helmet from her closet).

Freddie: Let's go.

(Outside)

Freddie: Alright. The first thing you need to know is balance. Make sure you're not leaning the wrong way.

Carly: (balanced correctly) Ok. Now what?

Freddie: Put you left foot on the ground and your right foot on the front of the board.

Carly: Ok.

Freddie: Now slowly move forward using your left foot to push off. Keep your right foot on it.

Carly: (moves forward) Hey! This is cool...WOAH! (starts to fall of her skateboard)

Freddie: Woah! (runs up and catches Carly)

Carly: (thinking) Wow. Freddie is very stong if her caught me.

Freddie: (thinking) That was scary.

(Carly slowly leans in and kisses Freddie. Freddie is startled but doesn't move)

Sam: (comes around the corner) Hey, Carly! I heard you out... (sees Carly kissing Freddie and thinks) Wow. Carly's in love with the dork?

(Idea #2)

(Carly and Freddie are hanging out at the Groovy Smoothie)

Carly: Did you see the look on T-bo's face when the smoothie machine sprayed him?

Freddie: Yeah! That was hilarious! (laughs with Carly)

Carly: (looks up) It's a beautiful night. I think it's supposed to rain, though.

Freddie: Well, we should get going then. (Walks home with Carly)

(In the Bushwell Plaza hallway)

Freddie: Well, I'll see ya tomorrow.

Carly: Wait!

Freddie: Yeah?

Carly: I want to give you something.

Freddie: What is it?

Carly: Close your eyes.

(Freddie closes his eyes. Carly kisses him)

Carly: (thinking) Although I've waited for the longest time, it was worth it.

Freddie: (thinking) Wow.

(Carly backs up and blushes and smiles)

Carly: Now I'll see you tomorrow.

Freddie: Ok.

Please tell me which is better so I can include it in a Creddie Story. Thanks!