Talk:Creddie/@comment-3425559-20111029151026

I have a little preview for my new story 'One Last Kiss.' This scene is kind of a spoiler, but it's the sweetest one in the story

Her lower lip quivered as she tried to find the right words. Her heart felt like it had stopped beating, like it had suddenly disappeared. Finally, he had told her the truth. But not the way she wanted it.

"But, Freddie, I love you." she said.

Freddie sighed and dropped Carly's hand.

"I love you, too. But I also love Sam." he said.

"Freddie, please." Carly begged.

"I'm sorry." Freddie said. He looked at his watch. "I should go."

Carly watched, helplessly, as Freddie reached for the doorknob.

"Wait!" she said, forcing the word out.

Freddie turned to look at her. "What?"

"One last...kiss?" Carly said.

Freddie sighed, but let go of the doorknob and returned to his spot in front of Carly. He took her shoulders, nervousness creeping in. Carly's heatbeat suddenly returned as Freddie leaned in toward her. He noticed and gave a slight smile. Carly closed the gap in between them, their lips touching softly. Freddie breathed in Carly's lavender scented skin. Carly slowly kissed Freddie, then pulled away, afraid that it would go to far.

"I'll see you." Freddie finally said. He smiled slightly and disappeared out the door. Carly fought back the tears that welled up in her eyes.

Liked it? I knew you would (and if you don't, oh well)! This concentrates on the last kiss scene in iSaved Your Life: "When we kissed, before, I didn't realize it would be our last one. For a while..." Yes, Freddie's quote. Comment, please!