Talk:Seddie/@comment-24774793-20150501182025/@comment-25819493-20150501194603

Did they really need to have her eating in the first scene? That instantly connected my brain back to Sam, even if there was a giant baby bump present. Also, I agree with Toon that there's still a bland/boring tone to this character from what we're seeing. There's a certain energy or spark that's missing. I do hope that changes. Dark drama doesn't mean your energy has to be drained. Overall, it doesn't seem too bad though. I was glad to see effective music being used in the beginning to heighten the emotion.