User blog:MyPurpleFatCakes/Hetalia Fanfic: Sunday Morning (Chap. 1)

Okay, I was just wondering if maybe someone could proofread my fanfic before I publish it on DA (and maybe FF)? BTW, if you want to Chizzky, tell me and I'll post it here, but if it's anyone else, here's the link:

http://sta.sh/01vjdurix2op