Talk:Seddie/@comment-5250981-20130402122409

Hi everyone, I wanted you guys to give your opinion on this short story I wrote.

Its alot different than the usual stories I write, its not exacly a horror or sad its just more of a drama/hurt kind of story.

The way I came up with the story was I dreamed about it and when I woke up I wrote about it, so I have no idea if its good or not.

Here it is......

She sat alone in a dark room, a room so bare and cold. Her eyes red from the tears she cried. A speck of light shines through the darkness and lands across the old wood floor.Her body broken and cold. As deathly cold as the heart of the person who could put her in this pain.She trys to stand, dragging her body up of the floor. She limps across the room, There's a loud bang and a sharp scream.She lands on the floor hitting her head. A pool of blood appears around her seeping through the wood, Her killer a faint shadow in the darkness. Well that was it, what do you think.I know its not a happy story but I wanted to try more serious writing......x