User blog:Magicboots/Am I On The Right Lines, Or Totally Off-track?

So, I was really bored, and I started to think about Seddie. Yeah, I Seddie (we all know that... if you don't know that... where have you been?!? lol) and I also  iOMG. I know that there were a lot of those continuation fics, and trust me, I read a lot of them. Some were good. Some... not so good. But mostly good!

Anyways, I decided to try one out for myself. I like it (kinda), and I don't think that it's the worst out there. Well, it's not "out there" yet, because, uh, I haven't finished the chapter yet (although the feeling I'm having is that I want it to be a multi-chapter), but still.

I would just like to see if it's good enough for you guys to want to read, not just read because I'm on this wiki. So... here's a little piece of what I've got (not a section from the very beginning, but close):

''Sam blinked, and blinked again, and again. Each time she blinked with more force. He just stood there. He didn't move, he didn't speak. He seemed... numb.''

''Sam stared at the stiff boy in front of her, and a diminutive, gleaming tear rolled down her cheek. He didn't kiss her back. Was there something wrong with her? Had she made an awful mistake? She took a step backwards, and began to leave. Sam had never felt so simpleminded, so... meaningless... in her entire life.''

What do you think? Magicboots  (talk to me!)   18:36, April 28, 2011 (UTC)