User blog comment:Magicboots/Am I On The Right Lines, Or Totally Off-track?/@comment-3517755-20110428194948

I REALLY like this, please continue it! Especially the use of the word simpleminded, I really like how that sentence is strung together. xD If you have the time, I hope you can perhaps read and edit the one continuation I have on my page, it's in a half script-half story form though.... But please continue this, it reads very well.