Talk:Seddie/@comment-3455842-20110719020022/@comment-3092491-20110719031336

Needs a theme, a purpose, some sort of meaning. Not just random dribbling on for some sort of wish fulfillment about writing these characters.

An always good and essential tip is to give your character(s) motivation. Motivation is key. Quick and easy and perfectly legitimate way to make conflict? Give the character(s) something they want and then take it away. You can make this as literal or abstract as you want.

Spelling and grammar are always important.