Thread:Alica123/@comment-2219055-20120611161341/@comment-2208586-20120621113615

@SC Lemme give you a few points why the writing sucks:


 * some grammar mistakes
 * sometimes Stephenie Meyer lacks the ability to write full sentences
 * very one-dimensional characters (think wider than Edward and Bella)
 * often lacks the ability to write realistic conversations
 * nothing really happens until the very end of a book, sometimes not even then
 * describes things instead of showing them
 * etc.